It is pretty slow-moving, yeah. The first half of the story in particular has a lot of planning and talking, and a lot of really unnecessary stuff about life at the South Pole. I think the second half moves more quickly, once the time machine is built and Loki and Jane start using it to do various things.
ETA: Oh, I have not heard of DreamFlight, I will check them out pronto! Thank you!
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Date: 2015-02-17 09:43 pm (UTC)ETA: Oh, I have not heard of DreamFlight, I will check them out pronto! Thank you!